Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Introduction to Impressing The Girls

For my fourth piece I chose a blog entry it was written the first week of February. It was a free write, so we could write about anything. I titled it, “Impressing the Girls.” I was always trying to impress any cute girls that I came across. It didn’t always end the way I planed, and this is one of those times. This piece really shows my writing style, humorous and descriptive. An example of this is, “There I lay, tangled in the bike watching the clouds roll by. While in the background I hear hysterical laughter with the occasional request if I was still alive,” and, “On the inside I knew this was going to hurt. The girls became ecstatic and stated whistling and cheering me on. I turned my head to bask in the glory.” I like to make people laugh and this piece reflects that. Just a warning, I do not recommend drink anything before reading it, you do not want it shooting out of your nose.

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